Saturday, January 14, 2006

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Once upon a time
in the beautiful surroundings
people lived happily.
No fences, trees
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nimal dunuhinga
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Coach Roth 10 February 2008

Love this...the harmony ends with the crude word 'barbarous'...excellent...I read it because I have a poem with the same title...obviously two different thoughts...well done. Coach

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