Sunday, November 6, 2005
Moving Apart Comments
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Moving apart
As quietly as a puddle freezes,
Crying as silently as slush.
Ah, how long it seems
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Charles Chaim Wax
06 November 2005
a beautiful poem strong image deep feeling can feel the cold touch it taste it keep up the good work
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3/10/2026 10:30:22 AM # 1.0.0
oooh, i like this. very strong image...and i kinda know that feeling, where you know you're moving away from someone, and it makes your stomach turn to sludge, but you know there's nothing you can do about it...you've really captured that moment here. nice one!