Mowing Poem by David Plantinga

Mowing

Rating: 4.5

When the nimble aphids are leaping
And squat caterpillars are creeping
They're fleeing on before
The mower's starting roar,
Like field-mice at the autumn reaping.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 10 June 2024

I really like this poem of yours, well written. I would have swapped 'starting' for 'startling' but maybe that's just me.

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John Carter Brown 10 June 2024

Nice one David

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