Friday, September 20, 2013

Mr. Happiness - Wanted Comments

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Once there was a time,
He ever used to eat lime.
He cried aloud cause something wasn’t fine,
He said, ” I don’t have a toy of mine.”
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Mayank Mehta
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 September 2013

really nice and I enjoyed reading your poem Moon Mehta, but the last line is quite different, though very rhythmic. keep writing...

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Gajanan Mishra 20 September 2013

light of hope, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment. Especially read my poem'Family members' and vote.

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