Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Mud On My Hands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Green eyes in the crevices of rocks
will not let the fossil weep
for innocent sun.
A mayfly floats like
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Satish Verma
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Ridge Cahill 29 December 2008

Terrific! The opening lines are outstanding and the premise beautifully crafted.

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Goldy Locks 23 December 2008

perfect-o. And the title clinches it~! ! ~

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Reshma Ramesh 23 December 2008

this was not the end i wished.........do we always get what we want....well penned

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