My Broken Heart Poem by sarah may

My Broken Heart

Rating: 3.5


in the dark corners my my broken heart
all alone
the only thing i feel is my tears rolling down my face
all i see is my heart braking even more
all i can think about is why you did this to me

Saturday, January 24, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Robert 20 June 2009

Veryy nice short poem, sorrow is in every verse. Keep up the great writes: D H&K's Jess <33

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very good and simple keep up the great work sarah! -Layla

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