My Burning Heart Poem by christian guice

My Burning Heart

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As i lay awake tonight because i can't sleep i wanna be with you
if you was beside me i loveing kiss u.

But now ur gone and i miss u
what have i gotten myself into to i am depessed over you feeling possessed by u i will protest to u obsessed over u this is hard for me to digest is this my test? i have this thoughts about addressing you but hold back stressing all night over you.

As i look back on life what would i do to take it to ease i would squeeze you and hold you but i treated you more like a disease.

feeling ashamed asking who is to be blamed fearing the answer becuase i knew it was aimed at my name.

Gurl u was the one to fill in my errors but now ur gone and all i get is terror trap caught in a maze as a pray asking for better days hopeing that me and u is just a phase and we will get over it someday.

Girl u is my one and only now you got me feeling so lonely my heart is broken into pieces
as i look at ur pictures my heart and love for you increases as i wanted to release this as i see we grew apart now it put to decease.

Gurl my buring heart is now on fire and your everything that i desire you have everything that i require i know you was there for me to the wire can you believe i became a lair? feeling like i can't take this anymore my heart has retire.

No need to pretend i knew are love was goin to last to the end you was so sweet my love i surrender.

Passion i feel it's to hard to conceal so i know it's forreal as i appoach you at the bus service i started to get nervous i wanted to tell you how i fell but knowing that wouldn't help it will only cause problems so i kept to myself.

to see you there i am yearning ever step i take my heart kepts on burning look at the time watch the clock kept turning.

As so to my dreams to see you as my wife that you will be in my life everything will be all right but what i seen stop everything in sight what i seen wife became knife and my heart.

Too see her wit another man tear came down my cheek falling down to my knee i became weak becuase i see u kiss him

Adden fire to my burning heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 19 October 2009

Dear Christian, you got the heart, you got the meanings and honestly you got to learn the ways, say all, what you want to say from the heart, but nevertheless, say in a poetic way, whether is a rhythm or not, as long as you get your message across, we learn from one another, I was there when I started, please, read some of my poems, and you will see, you are in the right track, you got my vote, well penned, feelings are feelings nevertheless, Love and Peace, Romeo

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