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My Darkness

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Im in a dark place please show me the light, The demons are real and filled with hate. I guess my happiness will have to wait.I scream so loud but nobody listens, Please someone hear me im in a bad condition. Im blind and Im hurt can you give me a hand? I feel like a grain of sand. So small in my world as I fall thru the cracks, it's empty Im here such a tiny space. There's no air in here and Im starting to fade, just thankful if I live to see another day. Please heal me Lord this pain is to much, your with me Lord.I pray everyday, but you already know. I pour my burdens into your ear, then I feel better because I hear your voice, It will be alright child the pain only lasts a little while. I feel there's no light at the end of the tunnel, but you have faith in me Lord there is no doubt. Im with you my child and my love shines through, You love me and I love you.

Saturday, December 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,sadness
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Bri Edwards 26 January 2018

favorite lines: I feel like a grain of sand. So small in my world as I fall thru the cracks my daughter is a medical doctor but suffers from anxiety. yes, doctors can be ill as well. her mom was anxious also; anxious to get rid of me! ! ! ha ha. good luck with yours. i wonder if your children are at home daily. could be good OR bad, i suppose, for your conditions. bri :)

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Theresa Dunn 27 January 2018

Lol my other half is the reason for a lot of my issues, Thank you for the luck and yes my children are with me everyday and thankfully understand and don’t give me to much grief but they are my saving graces

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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2017

A tale of loss of sunshine in a life at its lowest ebb, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Theresa.

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Theresa Dunn 02 December 2017

Thank you very much! One of my first poems. I just started writing almost a year ago.

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Theresa Dunn 02 December 2017

Depression and Anxiety sucks!

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Theresa Dunn 02 December 2017

Comments please

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