Sunday, November 18, 2012

My Defeat Comments

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A spark of ego within me unruly
Ignited by my imperious thoughts
Turning my mind to calefactory
Destroyed the me who I was
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Narayan Subramaniyam
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Narayan Subramaniyam 18 November 2012

thanks for the comments. do visit narayan-ps.blogspot.com for more

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Zeenat Fatima 18 November 2012

'spark of ego within me'.. Liked this very line.. Keep it up.: -)

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Vipins Puthooran 18 November 2012

Oh my pythonic ego - the reason for my defeat/// 'tis a good poem! ! ! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 18 November 2012

I set out to conquere.. Thanks For the poem. I invite you to kindly read my poems and comment.

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