My Distant Star Poem by Iris Athena

My Distant Star

Rating: 5.0


Watching you from afar my distant star
So bright and so fine
But can't ever be mine
Different path have we took
Different ways have we look
Choices we have forbid our ties
Only in dreams, we are able to defy

And if fate has strayed
Chances has betrayed
For you, dare i say
NEVER will i walk away
So believe me my love you are divine
Though our stand are not align
Our life may not bind
But in my heart will i build your shrine
Our sacred love in one combines
A million years from now it shall not decline

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
2 lovers,1 forbidden love. The world may stop them from being together, but can't never stop them from loving each other.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2020

Watching you from afar my distant star So bright and so fine But can't ever be mine Different path have we took Different ways have we look.. the story of a forbidddn love. but their love goes on and on. a very fine poem. tony

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