Sunday, July 5, 2009

'My Everything' Comments

Rating: 3.1

I’m sitting here and laying down
I’m waiting here for that special girl to call
The voices in my head all day
Yet they never fade away
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dan wittenkeller
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 July 2009

It's a kinda 'puppy love'.You do have a talent Dan.Keep on writing bro! ! !

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Just start by a small thing and see, how much you can change the world! ..... it is so beautifully woven with words... i loved and like it..... beautiful theme.... read mine, , , , mary tomarry, ....dreams all not come true....miss i miss you and go to hell

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your everything is written to the fullest... nice poem, well expressed, in love silence speaks more than words.. read my poems when you find time, thank you..

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Callie Valentine 05 July 2009

Oh my goodness, this is definitely the sweetest poem I've ever read. :)

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