My Family Poem by Kimberley Claire Lim

My Family



My family is like my pillar of support
My strength
My listening ear
My comfort

Everytime when I fall down
Like a dog which has been lost in a jungle
For Three days and Three nights
Falling to the ground
After it has been found
Tired and hungry
My mother picks me up
And give me Moral and Mental support

Everytime when I am feeling down
And the 'emotional bottle' inside me is filled to the maximum
My sister is always there
With a pair of listening ears
Which are ready to hear my problems
Ready to give me advice

Everytime when I feel that
I have no more sterngth
My father is always there
Praying for me
And keeping me going
Through the trials of my life

Without my family
I would be like a lost sheep
Without shepherds
That would guide it through its way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 12 September 2008

great write...family with string attachement is solid..good concept nicely versed... Ency Bearis

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