Monday, June 20, 2016

My Father Comments

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My father was an ocean of Love
Which I known so late.
He was a treasured Gem
Which I lost by mistake.
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Archana Ray
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Jazib Kamalvi 15 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice start, Archana Ray. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Conley Murray 20 June 2016

That is a great poem, I love it.

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Archana Ray 29 June 2016

Thank You for the comment.

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Rajnish Manga 20 June 2016

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful and emotional poem which is a great tribute to a father who is no more in this world now. This is very sad. I quote a few lines: My father was an ocean of Love Which I lost by mistake. He was pillar of Strength Which I realized after his demise.

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Archana Ray 29 June 2016

Thank You for understanding my poem and its deep emotional turmoil.

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