My Feelings... Poem by chanchal dhakal

My Feelings...

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I feel alone,
when i am spared from the gathering
I feel timid,
sitting by a corner and looking others chattering

I feel left out,
when my friends do not have me in a team
I feel awkward,
standing and watching others join up the team.

So, i feel like falling in a well of deep sorrow
with the sadness in place of water
as it can't repay me my happiness
Money is not a big deal or matter.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 02 September 2008

Feeling is multidimentional aspect of life. Here we get feeling alone, timid, left out, awkward, and like falling in a well of deep sorrow. Good.

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sakshichanchal Dhakal 15 July 2008

la la afani feeling ho? ? ? ? anwayz poem's fine. sakshi you are great, sarai ramro kabita sarjiyeko chhau.

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