My Feelings... Poem by chanchal dhakal

My Feelings...

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I feel alone,
when i am spared from the gathering
I feel timid,
sitting by a corner and looking others chattering

I feel left out,
when my friends do not have me in a team
I feel awkward,
standing and watching others join up the team.

So, i feel like falling in a well of deep sorrow
with the sadness in place of water
as it can't repay me my happiness
Money is not a big deal or matter.........

Monday, July 14, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 02 September 2008

Feeling is multidimentional aspect of life. Here we get feeling alone, timid, left out, awkward, and like falling in a well of deep sorrow. Good.

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sakshichanchal Dhakal 15 July 2008

la la afani feeling ho? ? ? ? anwayz poem's fine. sakshi you are great, sarai ramro kabita sarjiyeko chhau.

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