Friday, August 22, 2008

My First Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you looked into my eyes
It felt like I had won first prize
One of God's most beautiful charms
I was actually holding in my arms
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Tia Maria
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Laurie Hill 07 February 2009

A beautiful, soft, tenderness, captured in your lines, for a beautiful daughter. I really love this one. 10++

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Tom Balch 24 August 2008

Yes Tia, A really lovely and honest piece 10+

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Kris Smith 22 August 2008

Lovely poem memories of our children are sacred and always pull the heartstrings, fine write Tia 10 Chris

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Tia Maria

Tia Maria

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