My First Love! ! Poem by TOHISH BARASA

My First Love! !

Rating: 5.0


If people culd see my heart
Dey cn see it's growing inside 1st tym
I'm surprised it took dis long tym 2 charm..,
The impression u created
Dat made changes in me
Left me with a mark in exchange wid u...
She stil makes me think
How cute she looks like a mild lamb
She is my shining star
She the only 1 dat take me far
I want my journey to start only wid her

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
its the poem in which a poet is discribing about his first love story is seems to be start but the boy want girl to live with her for forever
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 11 August 2016

Lovely poem, some words are tricky yet meaningful.

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