Hollie McDaniel

My First Time

The pain was shocking
Yet left me begging for more
Laying on the bed
Underneath him
Not know what to do
Each time him moved
I gasped for breath
I couldn't scream
His sister was in the next room
He held me afterwards
As i cried
I couldn't stop
It was my first time
It hurt so bad
I couldn't really move
I feel asleep in his arms
And as he snuck out
He kissed my forehead
And said he was sorry
Then said good nite
What he didn't know
Was i was awake
I started to cry again
As i prayed to god
that my boyfriend never found out

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 20, 2007
Poem Edited: Friday, January 21, 2011

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Comments about My First Time by Hollie McDaniel

  • Charlotte Green (12/20/2007 12:51:00 AM)

    Hollie,
    I understand what you have writen about, as something like this happened to me.
    Its a wonderful poem, you are very stong to write it.
    Love and Peace Charlotte

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  • LeeAnne Russell (10/2/2007 9:39:00 AM)

    I was in that same boat once.

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  • Julie Rogers (3/28/2007 1:25:00 PM)

    whoa! ...IS IT FOR REAL? lol

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  • Nikki Neal (2/20/2007 5:55:00 PM)

    DEEP.is this 4rel? i just wanted to know

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