Hollie McDaniel

Wondering

sitting in class wondering what to do
who will tell my heart that it is now free
I'm scared that I'll never get over you
this thought wont let me go, wont let me be

how fast i went from some one you cared for
some one you loved, to someone you don't know
when did loving me became such a chore
you said you loved me and now I'm your foe

time won't make my pain go away for good
days or years it doesn't matter much
no one who knows me would think that it could
no matter the time, I'll still miss your touch

nothing can make me forget all the times
when it was possible to call you mine

written 2/23/07 English sonnet for a class

Poem Submitted: Friday, February 23, 2007
Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011

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Comments about Wondering by Hollie McDaniel

  • LeeAnne Russell (10/2/2007 9:48:00 AM)

    So heartfilled and touching! good work

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  • Michael Fischer (3/27/2007 2:26:00 PM)

    Nicely written poem. You definitely have potential as a writer. Hopefully everything works out for you in the world of love.
    -Michael

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  • Katie Rhodes (3/5/2007 11:46:00 PM)

    hey girl, i've felt this too. i'm here for u, even tho we are strangers.
    p.s. wonderful sonnet
    hugs and kisses
    kate

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