My Flower- The Modern World Comments

this was recomended to me by un known and tbh im glad he did. it is a really nice poem and is completely true!

I truly love your poem I've written a similar poem like this that I'm going to upload. Modern world truly is so much like an awakening monster destroying everything around it. I think its simplicity and succinctness are what make it so beautiful. Perhaps you'd like my poem ' The Flower of Pain '. Cheers.