Friday, August 28, 2020

My Frail, Ariel Soul: Comments

Rating: 5.0

My frail Ariel soul is blown towards other shores
Of consciousness; beyond this conventional world.
O it will not be confined by space and time or
Be simply satisfied with the mundane! With words,
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Shaun Cronick 28 August 2020

Brilliant Dominic! A brilliant write! A superb poem The Great Bard would salute you with his quill. To use The Tempest as your poetry template and bedrock is pure genius. And to use that plays finale where Ariel is finally freed to travel anywhere and to now see sights once denied is inspiring. 10+ this masterpiece deserves to be Poem Of The Day. A poem like Ariel, and Prospero to set free.

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