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My Friend, The Lord Jesus Christ

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Let me tell you about
My Friend in high places
He's there for me all day and night;
Voluntarily on a twenty-four hour call.
I bring him my joys;
My cheerful moments and spectacular experiences,
He smiles with me
And reminds me these are his gifts to me.
I bring him my troubles;
My tattered life and shattered dreams,
I bring him my fears;
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Andrew Jones 12 January 2005
The content of this is great. Well, how could it not be? But it doesn't really flow like poetry. It's very free. I think you should work on something with the same topic and see if you can make it flow a little more easily.
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