Saturday, March 28, 2009

My Gems Comments

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three gifts, three gems given to me by the Lord..
three beautiful girls that i adore.
watching you grow, taking those first steps,
brought me to my knees, everything within my heart I kept
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Lorenzo Cruz
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Caroline Guedes 23 August 2009

Wow! So heartfelt. I feel heartbroken. I hope this isn't based on true events! My favourite line is 'my cheeks eroded from the tears that dripped down my face'. Amazing work.

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Lorenzo Cruz

Lorenzo Cruz

South Bend, IN
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