My Goodbye To Him Poem by Soraka Starchild

My Goodbye To Him

Rating: 4.8


I was wrong
and selfish.
I now see the way he looks at her,
with his smile,
and his great blue eyes shining.
I don't deserve a boy like him,
and he deserves better,
like her.

Now I take in a deep breath,
remembering all the times we shared,
and slowly let it out,
letting go of those few memories,
but I can't
and instead sit down
and watch the world go by,
and mine come crashing down.
If I could say any more words to him
the only one would be goodbye,
but I can't
for fear i shall cry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 October 2014

Breaking up a relationship or when a loved one falls for somebody else is simply a tragedy in bliss of love. A lovely poem well articulated and nicely written. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Nicole Carter 18 March 2010

Amazing job! This is so beautiful and sad! !

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Soraka Starchild

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Thorton, Colorado
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