My Greatest Valentine Poem by Edwina Aleme

My Greatest Valentine

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I drifte into this day
and suddenly realised it's valentines day
I pondered upon how many valentines day
i have spent...
Fake, adultrated words of ' i love you'
then becomes along journey so long.
In all i remember one......just one
that got me love struck and didn't compromise
his love so sweet and pure
Love that cannot be compared
By night and by day, always there for me...
Priceless precious gifts he gave and more
he promised....
Always comforting and caring for me,
Holding me close all the time and
wouldn't let go....
scolds me when i am wrong and draws me close
for love sake...
My best friend, listens to me talk and keeps
my secrets...
When i cry, he makes me laugh
he's never far away....
Words are not enouh to spill out
to show how much he loves me
But one thing i know for sure is
He, is my greatest valentine.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 May 2008

my greatest valentine was when my girl ask me to sleep with her...............out of curiosity.

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Meggie Gultiano 11 February 2008

This is beautiful, Edwina! i love the flow of words..Happy Valentines Day to you

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