Wednesday, May 11, 2011

My Heart Cannot Bear Asking For Your Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart cannot bear asking for your forgiveness,
and at that moment, your happiness drains.
I change tune, wanting to believe in your rightness,
hoping, the devil's blood does not run through your veins.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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