(my Hero) A Story Poem by Walter Burlock

(my Hero) A Story

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When I was a little kid about 7 or 8 years old there was this girl. She was a lot older then me. She took care of me when my foster mother and father had a break. She was really caring and polite. I was really fussy but she got me what ever I needed. She showed me there is good out there. So I tried being like her. There was one time she let me steer her car, she still had control of the gas and the brake, I thought it was the coolest thing. When I grew up I noticed when you had no control over anything, you can have control for just a little at a time. You start to know your mistakes. When I was steering that car I was swerving, but I had her to correct my mistakes. Her correcting them for me while I was by her side, I learned it a lot faster then I would of on my own. Now we aren't that close to each other, and I started to forget what she taught me that one day. I didn't like how I was treating other people and I thought about stuff to be a better person. I thought and thought about it and I remembered what she did for me. I was changing a little at a time. There was a lot more then what I wrote in this story. I don't know how to thank her, maybe this story will do more than I think. Thank You for being my hero.

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Walter Burlock

Walter Burlock

P.I Maine
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