A silky mane shining like a brilliant jewel.
Short clean nails as the finest ivory.
A goal not to be some average tool.
Breath uncalled for the mint’s bribery.
Body long and straight as a hunters arrow.
Our heart’s beating as one to the fierce music of love.
Mind sharp as a knife but not as narrow.
Our hands fit perfectly, as hand in glove.
Brandy... WOW. That was REALLY SUPER GOOD. Even though these were kind of difficult to write, you still managed to write an AMAZING poem. Perfection. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Breath uncalled for the mint's bribery.' That is verbal awesomeness to me. For someone who claims that this poem was difficult to write, you certainly did a wonderful job. Great job and I hope to see more (unforced) poems from you in the future. Excellent. :)