My Jesus Comments

Still an excellent poem, your last line in stanza 5 you wrote: 'Like a thief he will come' the correct phrase is: 'Like a thief in the night He will come back'.Thank you for your attention

Still excellent poem, Cliff.

A good poem, Cliff. I cite your line: Destroyed a temple and rebuilt it in 3 days.. This temple is JESUS. When He was hanged on Golgotha, He is arisen after 3 days. That is the true meaning of your line. Most lines in The Holy Bible are worded in metaphors. They sound all true poetic. A 10+++ for the voting.

Keep it up