My Kite Poem Poem by Broken Angel

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A heart,
is as a kite.
Free to fly solo,
but still tied down.
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Freedom to do as it please's,
yet held down by many strings.
The sky's the limit,
only you can tell it when to stop.
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Like a kite,
you try to escape.
Leaving whatever stands in your way.
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Baring all your true colors to the world,
the outside looking of a colorful kite,
full of beauty.
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But like some hearts,
whats inside isn't always as colorful,
as it seems from a kite's point of view.
: : end: :

written: 2/15/06

*the last line i wasnt sure which sounded better...either as it seems from the out or as it seems from a kite's point of view*.

well here it is...BE TOTALLY HONEST! like brually honest....if it sucks then it sucks...but w/e i need all the advice i can get lol