Am I Ever Gonna Be Ok?

Rating: 5.0

don't get me wrong,
I'm not suggesting anything.
.~.
Just saying,
the pain is so deep.
Embedded ever so far,
within my hurting soul.
.~.
At times,
I feel well,
but at moments,
I still have pestilential thoughts.
.~.
I've tried to forgive,
but I guess I just can't.
Wanting to just hide,
forever to sleep and never seeing the light of day.
.~.
Only thing left to say,
is...Sorry for all of this,
the non forgiveness, hurt and thoughts.
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***** ********* 10 February 2006

this poem Broken Angel feels to me like a new beginning. Sorry is the hardest words to say sometimes, but it does wipe the slate clean. I hope you have a great day tomorrow. A perfect 10. Sorry I am crap at crit. It is perfect in my eyes Smiling at you Tai

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Patricia Gale 10 February 2006

Nice, deep emotion, wouldn't it be great if we could shut our feelings off like a lamp? Reagards Patricia

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