My Life Poem by Lorinda Harris

My Life

Rating: 4.3


Go ahead and pass your judgment
it dnt metter neither your thoughts or actions flatters me.
Im one of ah kind.
Most, Likely something you will never see
Attutidue: cocky;
These females cant stant to see me get mines.
Plastic i Dont Do!
Somthing i cant really pursue.
The only person i fear is the person in the mirror.
As my vison becomes Clear.
On who; s fake and who; s realer.
My life.
It; s somthing like ah book.
As i putt on an act to cover up my Pain.
Life; s ah complicated game.
And if you dont play it smart
you will fade away into the back ground.
This is real!
Never will i hide my thoughts.
Care less about what you thought.
My life i wouldnt trade for nothing,
Because thorugh out it all.
it made me somthing.
-Lo3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bright Rose 22 May 2009

wow, lovely and well written poem, I loved thye idea behind it, brilliant 10+

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Britany Crenshaw 22 May 2009

Lo, that was good. Go read some of mine && comment,

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