My Life Poem by Juanita Carter

My Life

Rating: 5.0


My life is like a cemetery
My cries are like acid rain
My blood burns like fire
My heart has no desire.

Why am I a walking dead?
Is it because I have no love?
Or feel no pain?

I'm fading away
With no words to say.
Can't you hear my emotional scream?
I'm right here lock in fear
Dying in my own arms.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juanita Carter 12 April 2013

thank you so much! ! (:

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Hope Janson 12 February 2013

i really love your poem good job! :)

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Aria Siren 12 February 2013

Dying in my own arms... What an excellent closing line. So full of emotion. Good read.

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