Open every door
Let my guards down
Now i'm free
I've got feelings deep inside
I never knew i had
You're my whisper
Your'e my cry
You're every feeling deep inside
You're my anger
You're my fear
You're my love, my heart, my dear
My life
I can sense a tingle down my spine
A sharpened taste of deep red wine
Cos what's the sense of being free
If you're not there to share with me
Every laugh and every cry
A thoughtful word
All truth, no lie
For you're forever in my heart
and that is all that matters
The end
meaningful, simple and to the point. i like it.u seem like a no-nonsense type of person. lovely poem
you used the second possesive modifier instead of the conjugated form of you are: 'you're'. i wouldn't have pointed it out except that it is such a big part of your poem.. foster
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem touched me, Lucy, it is so true.