My Life Poem by Baharak Barzin

My Life



I close my eyes and i see the whole world collapsed
released from sadness and rupture

I open my eyes and i behold Messiah
Intoxicated from love and life

My life can't be awakened no more
My eyes can't be sober no more

Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 14 March 2017

Does an apocalypse occur in the blink of an eye? That is what is narrated and things happen with amazing speed. Although the world as we live in it, collapses, all is not lost. The Messiah has arrived, eager to perform his mission. All is poised in readiness. But your poem stops at this crucial moment with the speaker reflects. I can inly hope trhe poem's net movement is toward a consolidation of hope and love, guaranteed by the Messiah's spiritual power.

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Baharak Barzin 15 March 2017

Hi Daniel thank you for reading my poetry I believe that an apocalypse occures in every eye blink of every creature and all that matters is love and love and love. Eyes can't be more sober with anything but love, souls can't be more awakened than anything but love

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