Gentle touch of love hidden in your skies
Hit my waves of red
It made me who i am
It made whom i love
Gentle touch of love hidden in your skies
Hit me in the heart
It made my world so bright
It made the world so right
This is a sincere and total expression of gratitude. Love is the gift, and both giver and receiver are completely fulfilled. So as we read your poem, we enter a space of absolute content, which makes this moment a kind of foretaste of Heaven, however brief. The 2nd and 3rd stanzas deftly show the moral and spiritual benefits this love conveys. Love worked its special magic and made both better than your previous selves, and then the world you now inhabit if right and good. You are perfectly matched with your new loving home. You have expressed all of this in the clearest, most accessible language - that by itself is persuasive - your certainty of this reality of triumphant love is the gentlest persuasion. This is another Poem of Radiance by you! We n-e-e-d such hope.
It made me who i am It made whom i love Gentle touch of love hidden in your skies Hit me in the heart! ! lovely piece of art Thank you for sharing the Thoughts Poet! ! Full Votes!
This is a gentle touch regarding emotions, it's not a poem of overwhelmingly powerful feelings but one of quieter persuasion. As such it is a necessary act of love, because we cannot always live at the fever pitch of so many poems by Hafez - well, he could but but we live complicated lives with many other pressures and demands. What runs through this poem is a promise to be faithful and loving over the long term of a relationship and not just those BIG MOMENTS which everyone recognizes but rather in the succession of days when we need a calmer, quieter reassurance, Yes you are my beloved and will always be.
Gentle touch of love hidden in your skies Hit my waves of red It made me who i am It made whom i love Gentle touch of love hidden in your skies Hit me in the heart It made my world so bright It made the world so right excellent poem,10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gentle touch of love hidden in your skies Hit me in the heart It made my world so bright It made the world so right - - - - - - - A great poem - - -The poet finds his love as a part of God's love.