Friday, June 17, 2005

My Little Flower Comments

Rating: 3.0

Hovering around the lilly white,
What i know is round and bright.

Sets me dizzy all through the night,
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Abhilash Pillai
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Scarborough Gypsy 17 June 2005

This is really lovely and original. The whole angle you have taken with this is quite beautiful. I enjoyed this very much from the beginning all the way down to the last line. I evn thought the title was perfect. Congrats Gyp's

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