My Love Poem by Kate Warner

My Love

Rating: 4.3


I'm sitting here wondering
What it is im waiting for
I'm thinking and im pondering
I really dont know anymore

I wish there was something
to help me and to guide
but I feel i'm alone
And there's nothing else to hide

I pray for a change
I pray for things to work
But praying feels strange
And I'm already hurt

I always say lets work it out
I always seem to forgive
But everytime i do this
He never seems to give

I try my hardest to ignore
But you cant hide the pain
I leave through that big door
But I come back all the same

I wish you knew how much
I would do to make u happy
I wish I knew how much
How you make me so unhappy

So as I lie here looking up
at the sky so bright and blue
I know that one day, my love
It will all come back to you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jason Taylor 01 September 2008

I like this a real lot I new I was going to make a comment on it when I read the First three verses. The rhyming is really good two and the last verse I really liked. Keep it up a 9 from me well done.

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Tanya Stanford 01 September 2008

What a brilliant way of expressing your emotions. Well done. Love the rhyme to.

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