Friday, April 3, 2009
My Love Churns As Wheels On A Train Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I dig with a tablespoon though the sand dunes of life
as the moon looks on me and laughs
(soon soon the moon cries out a reply)
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Fay Slimm
04 April 2009
The imagery in this one is strong and very potent Randy - - the first line hits with the 'digging with a tablespoon through the sands of life' - an excellent love poem and deserves more than the ten I can give it..... from Fay...
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12/15/2025 8:17:22 PM # 1.0.0
This one Andy is simply unique the tablespoon image particularly. Your poem has endless amazing images 'the eyes of diamonds cries with tears of pearls, sprinkle the darkness with I love you'. It blows me away. Karin Anderson 10/10