My Lover Poem by tionna estrada

My Lover

Rating: 5.0


close to you
i feel ur heart
i see u smile
we r soo close
but to far away in a 1000 miles

marissa ill come for u
just to see ur face
u r my angel
ina dark place

shes soo beautiful
she shines soo bright
her colors draw me in
its too hard to fight

hunny u caught me
u took my heart away
u left me breathless
i dont know what to say

i love this girl
she is my saint
just lika poison
her lips ill kiss to taint

you and i
we live in our world
this isnt the dreamland
this is for real babygirl

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 July 2011

A very impressive and well penned and also poignant poem full of imagery and fine texture! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your great talent! Love and Peace for always! RDV from NYC...

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Stefanie Fontker 19 July 2011

It's funny, I just wrote a poem with a similar title. Anyhow, great work, really beautiful.

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Marissa Dunken 18 July 2011

Omg Baby I love it! !

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