My Moon….! Poem by Devanshu Patel

My Moon….!



My Moon….!

The moon was oft called to be mysterious;
Sometimes thought to be fearful.
I wonder, they were what, silly or serious?
For me, he is always cheerful.

I love to keep watching the Moon;
And feeling a kind of bliss.
On seeing the Moon, a kind of boon,
I feel like, heaven transmits.

Waxing or waning, I don't wanna care;
And neither the spots on the face.
Lunar effects, for scholars, I spare,
Just wanting his favor and grace.

I know, my moon is staying in the sky;
And has to be fair to all.
I wish he could bless, if I could fly,
Though it would never befall.

For him could I wish, to be happy and hale;
No eclipse could engulf his face,
Stay blessed forever and never be pale,
And shower elixir from the space….!

©Devanshu patel
11/28/2018

My Moon….!
Wednesday, November 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,wishing,affection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 November 2018

It took me a while, online, to find a definition of fearful which sounded right, assuming you meant people were sometimes afraid of the moon. causing or likely to cause people to be afraid; horrifying. ...Am i correct? :) i don't understand your use of spare. hmm? For 2 reasons i would drop the from the last line, ..but i understand. you obviously are 'in love with' the moon, or want us to think you are! Are you a werewolf? ? to MyPoemList bri (:

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2018

It is a beautiful poem on moon having haunting expression. I love the following lines very much. For him could I wish, to be happy and hale; No eclipse could engulf his face, Stay blessed forever and never be pale, And shower elixir from the space….! thanks for sharing.

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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