Tuesday, February 12, 2008

My Mother Did Not Want Me Comments

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Not really wanted as a child,
Yet into this world I came,
Not to be a bundle of joy,
Just someone to give a name.
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Franklin Spriggs
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Stacey Watts 12 August 2008

Thank you for sharing this. You are truly an amazing poet.

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Well, it doesn't matter if we are abandoned by our parents or friends... there are always other people who can accept us the way we are; give us love and friendship and paint our world with bright hues. And you have said it so well in this beautiful poem...

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Mary Gordley 12 February 2008

Franklin, welcome to Poem Hunter and thanks for sharing from your heart. Your poem reminds me of one I wrote called 'Walking Wounded'

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MCKENZi : ] 12 February 2008

wow. powerful, flows nicely. good work. keep it up, : ]

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Franklin Spriggs

Franklin Spriggs

Portsmouth, Ohio
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