Saturday, February 17, 2007

My Pain Is Me Comments

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My pain is my own.
Here by my own doing.

My pain is me.
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Nancy Winter Miranda
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David Taylor 17 February 2007

We all live at an acceptable level of 'pain' It seems to define our limited existance.

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The Dead Poet 17 February 2007

lol, I like the line... Whatever. It makes it more real without it, the poem may have felt over the top, but with it, it makes it more meaningful and less, its a great way to balance it out. Nice job!

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