Eli MorenoDrew

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My Physical State

Poem by Eli MorenoDrew

The levies of my skull have been breached by my brains as they slowly make their way down into the top of my eyes as my head starts to feel heavier and heavier. I’m starting to see things that aren’t there. My innards are making movements they shouldn’t make. I’m feeling every blood cell move through my veins and every muscle twitch. My vision is tunneling and my tunnel is visioning. Seeming like everything is moving slower, and slower, and slower.


Comments about My Physical State by Eli MorenoDrew

  • Aaron Tate (3/16/2008 4:35:00 PM)

    Ah a freak ache. like a headache sept your not really in any pain, just confusion.: :) good write.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 24, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011