My Point Of View Poem by Forsythia Azalea

My Point Of View



From afar, this is what I see:
A knight in shining armor
with a smile so heavenly
that it leaves me breathless

The view may not be the best
sitting in the last row
only catching glimpses
but it is enough for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Forsythia Azalea 10 November 2009

I'm glad that my poem's nice :) Thank you for saying so and I really hope that the knight would come over! xD Thanks for your comment! ^^

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 10 November 2009

A confident and sure experience with peace and understanding at hand.

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Sabrina Jubahar 10 November 2009

nice poem, nice point of view, indeed! may the knight will soon come over to the last row - to where you're sitting. :)

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