My Psalm Poem by Ahyela Andojar

My Psalm

Rating: 3.5


In my world long been found
Long I kept this revered psalm
Inside me it grew abound
Yet to fool another one -
Another man, I barely know.

And so I look to this man’s eye
To plow the depth of his desire
What I saw, I have not seen
I’m afraid it’s all a dream
And in this dream, I’ll drown again.

My frequent sighs have all gathered
Gauged the mirth for truth and candid
I shall but lift remaining faith
Or opt to fall beneath thy feet
I shall look not far beyond

Tell me now if I to find,
Another man, I barely know
Will claim my world, my love, all awe
Tell me now or I shall forgo
Another man, I barely know.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmed Abomahfouz 13 March 2014

good poem, words are rich, rhyme is musical, structure needs re-evaluation

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