Beryl Jacob


My Rain - Poem by Beryl Jacob

When it become late evening
I went to my terrace, for a walk
I saw clouds coming together and it was dark
The sun dissappeared
I closed my eyes and started to dream
Suddenly, something fell on my eyes
I opened my eyes
I realize that it was a drop of water
But for me
It was drop of love
It started raining
I thought i was in paradise with drops of love
Then i realized i was in my terrace
My eyes began to shut
I was very sleepy and
I selpt there happily with drops of love

Topic(s) of this poem: rain


Comments about My Rain by Beryl Jacob

  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (11/4/2018 7:55:00 PM)

    I opened my eyes
    I realize that it was a drop of water
    But for me
    It was drop of love....... with drops of love i was in paradise....... wonderful imagination..... you are so young my dear poet and you are gifted with special talents from God........ write and write my dear young poet. tony
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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (8/30/2017 1:12:00 PM)

    A nice poetic imagination, Jacob. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (6/9/2017 1:54:00 AM)

    Such a lovely poem..... a big 10++++++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 8, 2017



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