My Rain Poem by Bichitra Anand

My Rain

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Millions of thoughts​
As millions rain drops
Falling down the earth
Drops on my mind,
Patter me heavy.

And sometimes,
Everything vapourise
Making me vacuous,
Sub-conscious
I fall on my bed.

Saturday, June 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 03 July 2017

Wonderful expression of a natural process that goes into the miind- conscious, sub-conscious or unconscious- what we experience sometimes it is retained and sometimes forgotten. Let us be thankful to God who has given us the ability to forget. Thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 June 2017

Good. You may like to read my poem, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks

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