'My Rain' Poem by Elie Lugo

'My Rain'

Rating: 4.3


She huddles in a corner,
away from everyone else.
She sits there and stares blankly,
trynna get a hold of herself.

Everyone else is smiling,
She doesnt have to pretend.
Cuz everyone think she's fine,
But she feels so close to the end.

Her body feels empty.
Souless for now,
She's trynna hold back the tears,
But she doesnt know how.

Her skin is getting pale,
As her face shows the pain
Water drops from her eyes now,
And she calls it 'My rain'

It creeps upon her,
as she awaits for the pain to be more
How came her be broken now
When it wasnt whole before? ?

So many sleepless nights she's had,
curling in a ball,
trying to control it,
but her faith in doing that falls.

She's in agonizing pain
From the blows to her chest.
Her heart can barely take it,
Why wont the pain take a rest?

She sighs and gives in
The pain found a way to cheat
It came in so forcefully,
She screams in defeat.

The screams are piercing,
Yet no one hears
No opens their eyes;
They dont even see a single tear.

She wonders,
Why should she hold on.
If no one is here for her,
And that people that were are gone?

She looks outside her window.
And feels the wind.
She thinks really hard
About giving her life in.

She cant do that though.
Shes completely against it
She tries not to think about that.
When she does, she feels sick.

She's waiting for her hero
To come and save her
She's so deep in sadness,
That she doesnt even stir.

Her head stays down
Her face in a frown
She thinks about running away
But she knows she will be found.

Away from everyone else,
She lets her thoughts cloud her vision
No knowin what to do,
Or to what she should make her decision

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 29 September 2011

trynna get a hold of herself. Honey, there really is no such word as 'trynna' I believe you meant, 'trying to' Adeline

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Marieta Maglas 28 May 2010

the way you express your emotion is very nice....thank you for sharing....Mari

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