My Room Poem by Maria Rose

My Room



Once—
The walls of my room was
made of silver stones of moon
and lighted by the stars of heaven.
My winged room flew
across the scapes of waters,
mountains and valleys

One day—
A monstrous snake crawled in
through the window extinguishing
the heaven-lent light out of my room.
I stood and shuddered in the Erebus of my room
in dread of the moment
the forked tongue lashed on my body.
In the brief lightening I saw
blood dripping from my moon-lent walls.

Afterwards—
Never light dawned upon me
And the fatal hissing trailed
Me rest of my darkness.
Some times I vainly tried to
wash away the stains from my walls
with my kisses and tears..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 25 March 2008

The room is a refuge that is ruined by outside forces, but how does one get back to its pristine purity?

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Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

the resder can feel the pain behind this metaphor...full of imagery...

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Jurietta Duraan 16 March 2008

Very stunning and powerful... brings vivid images to my mind.... well done Maria

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