Wednesday, April 11, 2007

My Sand Castle Comments

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I opened the creaky door and little windows.
Let wind comes to sooth me.
Nobody wants to stay for a while
And my burning altar cries.
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nimal dunuhinga
empty house
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Sandra Fowler 11 April 2007

Excellent imagery.The metaphor of the kite with broken strings is especially effective. Very poignant. Wishing you a better tomorrow. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
nimal dunuhinga
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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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